Wednesday 6 December 2017

My Final Post 2017





   















Here are some photos of 2017 in Rm 19. This year is my last year at primary but it has been amazing hut chaotic. I am so so sad to leave but I am also very exited to go to intermediate. I will miss all my friends and I will miss Mrs. P.

Wonder Language Features



WALT: recognize and understand specific language features

I was able to understand the meanings for different language features eg. personification, idioms, hyperbole. I also took my time to read what each meaning meant for each language feature.

Next time I will use some sticky notes to help me remember what each language feature meant. 

Auggie's Classroom - Perimeters


WALT: identify and use the perimeter rule to calculate the size of Auggie’s classroom.

I was able to make sure that the top and bottom decimal number were the same length and that the sides were the same length and also I was able to draw out an irregular shape and add the decimal amounts together. I learnt that if the top and bottom is longer than the sides it has to be a bigger decimal.

Next time I will try and make a more harder irregular shape.

Monday 4 December 2017

Precious McKenzie


                                                        Click here to see my book!!!
WALT: Edit my Precious McKenzie writing independently to identify errors and get my work ready for Book Creator publishing.

I was able to find my spelling mistakes and fix the red lines under the words. I was also able to re-read my story to make sure there were no words missing in my sentences.

Next time when I find facts I will add more detail to it.

Tuesday 28 November 2017

Wonder Portrait


This is my own Wonder Portrait with a quote. Rm 19 made these really cool Wonder portraits because we are reading a book called Wonder, it has a little boy called August in it. We made this on Wonder Creator and we could design our own wonder portrait and choose a cool precept to put with it.

Tuesday 31 October 2017

Kindness Poem


WALT: use new words to suit my acrostic poem

I was able to use new words in my acrostic poem that I have not used in my writing before, eg. Kindhearted and Everlasting. I was also able to use examples of kind words/kind actions in my sentences.

Next time I will try and use more new words in my poem and use a theasaurues to replace words that I have used before and change them into words I haven't used.

Thursday 26 October 2017

Recount - Writing


Write a rad recount:

I was able to use paragraphs and year 6 words.

Next time I need to use time connective words without being asked.